Wednesday, 21 September 2016
Friday, 16 September 2016
Diary post
Over the last couple of weeks we have been very busy learning new stuff.
On Monday the 9th of September all the year 6 went to camp MERC in long bay . It was so fun we got to do a lot of activities such as body boarding , stack EM, giant ladder , abseiling, rock climbing, sling shot , archery and outdoor survival. My favorite activity was abseiling and stack EM , I would love to go again
The gymnastic team had a gymnastic competition the day after camp . So we went to champ champs because we won the competition that we had before champ champs . We went to champ champ in the school van and we competed we did very well but only the boys got a placing they came 2 they did very well, we all did very well
other than that we have just been doing a story called show don't tell . We wrote about camp MERC and what our favorite activity was. Show don't tell is when you write a story and you have to say how you re feeling but you try not to tell them so say I wrote ( example ) my heart was beating fast because I was scared you wouldn't say that because that is telling everyone what your feeling you are just supposed to write ( example ) My heart was beating fast . So that is what a show don't tell story is about.
On Monday the 9th of September all the year 6 went to camp MERC in long bay . It was so fun we got to do a lot of activities such as body boarding , stack EM, giant ladder , abseiling, rock climbing, sling shot , archery and outdoor survival. My favorite activity was abseiling and stack EM , I would love to go again
The gymnastic team had a gymnastic competition the day after camp . So we went to champ champs because we won the competition that we had before champ champs . We went to champ champ in the school van and we competed we did very well but only the boys got a placing they came 2 they did very well, we all did very well
other than that we have just been doing a story called show don't tell . We wrote about camp MERC and what our favorite activity was. Show don't tell is when you write a story and you have to say how you re feeling but you try not to tell them so say I wrote ( example ) my heart was beating fast because I was scared you wouldn't say that because that is telling everyone what your feeling you are just supposed to write ( example ) My heart was beating fast . So that is what a show don't tell story is about.
Show Don't Tell
My Reflection :
Room 20 has been making show don't tell stories about how much fun we had at camp . We had to choose one activity that we liked the most , I choose abseiling. We had to highlight the sentences that were show not tell sentences. Show not tell is when you right a story but you say stuff that actually doesn't tell you like how you are feeling .
Tuesday, 13 September 2016
MERC
My Reflection :
All of the year 6 from elm park school went to camp MERC. It was really fun we did a lot of cool activity's and we also learnt about Sir Peter Blake . This certificate was from the people who work at camp MERC .
Prediction
My reflection :
Room 20 has been learning about how to make a prediction . We have been reading the book called the wrinkle in time. We had to make a prediction on what we thought was going to happen in the story .
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