Learning to write about a person I know

My Mum

My Mum has brown hair,brown eyes and she cleans at other peoples houses as a cleaner

My Mum has a four bedroom house and she lives next to a beach,she loves wearing jeans and necklaces. My Mums name Is Debbie. she always plays board games  and she plays outside with us. She Is an awesome Mum and she bought two cats,one rat and one guinea pig for us. she always goes shopping and takes us to the park.



My Reflection
Ive done a good job because I know a lot about my Mum which helped me  I also put in interesting words next time I would like to describe  a different person.